Author's name :: Golden Delicious
The Link :: Chapter one
Genre :: Sad, AU
Critique requested :: Opinion on likelihood of getting to EQD; Basic
spelling, punctuation and format run through; Style, characterisation,
themes and plot (not that kind); Making it more catchy
Anything Else :: Yes, it has already been featured on FimFiction. I want to
submit it to EqD before I finish it. It has a lot of pacing issues, so
pointing those out won't help. Telling me how to fix it will.
Thank you!
Number Of Distinct Docs Submitted :: 1
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