Hi, I hope it's alright for me to post here. i stumbled onto this site from Kwakerjak's post on fimfiction. Anyways, I'm looking for some opinions on a story that I'm trying to write.
FIMFiction seems to bring da Bronies. I'm no exception... Please note this work is WIP, and input is welcome. I expect no more than 5-6 chapters in total.
(Note: the main issue the EqD pre-reader had was show vs. tell, and they recommended we give it to an editor for a good look-over. They also mentioned capitalisation errors, some awkward sentence structures, and perhaps looking over the Editor's Omnibus as well)
In need of an editor. Story: Fallout Equestria Gathering Darkness Author: Aerondight Gdoc's link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/17FAC0sr6pXPkF6AHkQWdGJdQvIcdevXS12I37WQcsaI/edit FimFiction link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2577/Fallout-Equestria%3A-Gathering-Darkness
The story isn't new and it has been proofread up to chapter 8(to the best of my editors and my ability, but there is always room for improvement). My current editor has been having a lot of problems with his computer and isn't sure when/if he can continue. I only ask that you take a look at the story. If you find it interesting and have the time to spare I would really appreciate any help offered.
Anyone interested in working with me please let me know- 8aerondight8@gmail.com
Story: Life and Death Author: Semicolon Dash Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VUENYTAbsfu_lZBKEQKerC2TJ1ASZBTE9E6lF8wTPII/edit
Feel free to read as much or as little as you like. I took what I had of this story on FIMFiction and posted it to GDocs. I don't have an editor or anything so I've done this all by myself. It's not the best work, but any help you can give would be appreciated.
Just a heads up: in future, add it on to your previous comment.
And as another heads up: I'm going to try suggesting overhauling the comments section to RavensDagger when he gets back, so you may not have to remember that.
Rites of Ascension
ReplyDeleteCvBrony (on FimFiction.net )
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q0dsm33Md2IDcffWNClKLz2Ojt_VeBNqacNu683nnQo/edit
Thanks!
-Cv
Planes of Reality
ReplyDeleteFeyro Daligarus (Google account), Feyro (Fimfiction)
Chapter 1:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1XIV6NowpkWrEeK66PqNfRR_wV62gXjutMjRZ_S0hogY/edit
Chapter 2:https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iVP5ULoULva4wWjq8aBTxxPr9QJlDqmAbHBQCyP48NE/edit?pli=1
Now I must prepare for whatever harsh reviewing that may occur now... And I said I would put one of my stories up for reviewing eventually.
Violet Fire - Chapter 4
ReplyDeleteNagagon
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YRgAx71tiEE-d5bxzVy0k9s4PkAHIEqOOHjAZJww4Cg/edit?pli=1
this is for Fimfiction.net for the time being. EqD is a bit far fetched at the moment =p
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DeleteViolet Fire chapter 6
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Violet Fire chapter 6
Deletehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1Q1kAeuxOxljB_DiO16kDUhSGiZkJAdGqf5u8qCCGxqQ/edit
Broken Wings, Shattered Horns
ReplyDeleteLord Barcha
Chapter 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1I83LqItRWve9To5hjPdClC7lGtB6K8zBPYvw0rp7Mls/edit
Chapter 2: https://docs.google.com/document/d/15eyN6uQfBYFhxqioV1q1Tm1Ed0iIlg7u_E4qoyLAuQM/edit
Chapter 3 (in progress): https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ClzqyyBbBwiGBcfjj4TJbLUPfTilus08xbiEWGxf-FY/edit?pli=1
Cycles
ReplyDeleteMelon Hunter
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1CXcMTuQ4JiLhgqIsXWfT9i_1BcEQZsfAD2iZh5bsYpo/edit
No, I haven't given up on Equine Revolution, but this idea popped into my head and I just had to make a story out of it =D
Hi, I hope it's alright for me to post here. i stumbled onto this site from Kwakerjak's post on fimfiction. Anyways, I'm looking for some opinions on a story that I'm trying to write.
ReplyDeleteImpossible Choices
Aburi (on FimFiction)
Prologue: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1YOTEqPhYWBRtU4keB6BSLFXfYr6O8nOCibBBX7-AQ-s/edit
Chapter 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1PKuECjAPbrf33CAAn7t1y2qCawo__kX8zy96TdoBjvY/edit
Thank you for taking a look at this.
FIMFiction seems to bring da Bronies. I'm no exception... Please note this work is WIP, and input is welcome. I expect no more than 5-6 chapters in total.
ReplyDeleteA Thief at the Gala
HastyPixels
Prologue
https://docs.google.com/document/d/159EWk_pakq8FXImGu0wiFv3PXQcgz7Rpr31Yc6iVNNU/edit
Chapter One
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gI2MGIvsSYROqIv2f5K8MGW23Qmwaaqz8yk4kNVvwpo/edit
Chapter Two
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lJ-s70_BsHK4VRgCpWb8Ib3rPftQKWtimYqwQkiSiaw/edit
Chapter Three
https://docs.google.com/document/d/14X8nvypHRDDSykcTOZsz8GjlaUJ2abX97KDz9HyxHsY/edit
Author: Werewolf435
ReplyDeleteStory: Those who take the sword
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15w3Bpc27knOEHEvFxVF9fBNVNspZUEoW_etx6jl8Ci4/edit?pli=1
Thanks to anyone who edits. =3
cheezesauce presents: Draconequus - Chapter 5!
ReplyDeleteHehe, that took a while, didn't it? It's ready to be ripped apart now.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qX131hEkGWgpha5dWcI8az24TRE8X95PZN3nyDjql_g/edit
Author: Esle Ynopemos
ReplyDeleteStory: An Election in Ponyville
Prologue: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OaV96BCY0ha7cl_aDOphZlfdoOtoGQ5PjX0mCgkHEhI/edit
Chapter 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1tDLdC8Vb20PDflyarPgkLxbYZxCx7zHkatqEQFQK7mc/edit
Chapter 2: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kKof72-7ak9SpC3zG7opFzuGd5vDbS7w9tI_yCzXsIs/edit
This is my first time working with Google docs, so I hope you can forgive me if I didn't do something quite right putting them up.
Update:
DeleteChapter 3
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qay8u2HUjm4sa7AD9bk4iZcWX8fEyGt0fHTzSBVZMFU/edit
Author: The Dinky Society
ReplyDeleteStory: Tales Of A Dreamer
Chapter 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1qxvsyh6p4zZkS6ENsTb-nTP9wLOxSDUit2NcXrmcirg/edit
(Note: the main issue the EqD pre-reader had was show vs. tell, and they recommended we give it to an editor for a good look-over. They also mentioned capitalisation errors, some awkward sentence structures, and perhaps looking over the Editor's Omnibus as well)
"At The End of The Rainbow"
ReplyDeleteCritic
Ch.1
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Csxn6EgcTrWg1dQgxWpVZOQaMIyD50Fu2btFm27QgI4/edit
Violet Fire - chapter 5
ReplyDeleteNagagon
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bFcMamTxp_ogTbpsYJxXdOFobYE7CqMc4Xi4mNXI6L4/edit
Hmm, could you add this to the end of the last post about this fic? I mean, in the comments? (Until I learn how to push things up)
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ReplyDeleteDark Skies on Cutie'd Thighs
ReplyDeleteReflexrex
Chapter 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1iUvdwCWC6-uWnfShfmYK8iIR7xije8ejuWPwiVc16sI/edit
Chapter 2: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1r6ylHtW7wRwz3azou9yvphn2MCrhW0Cs-FNMkqQa95U/edit
When Your Best Isn't Good Enough
ReplyDeletepuppo530
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WtoyywGywp-E31GBuKn7-JbSbzpZ1i_4J-c5NmgICjA/edit
In need of an editor.
ReplyDeleteStory: Fallout Equestria Gathering Darkness
Author: Aerondight
Gdoc's link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/17FAC0sr6pXPkF6AHkQWdGJdQvIcdevXS12I37WQcsaI/edit
FimFiction link: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/2577/Fallout-Equestria%3A-Gathering-Darkness
The story isn't new and it has been proofread up to chapter 8(to the best of my editors and my ability, but there is always room for improvement). My current editor has been having a lot of problems with his computer and isn't sure when/if he can continue. I only ask that you take a look at the story. If you find it interesting and have the time to spare I would really appreciate any help offered.
Anyone interested in working with me please let me know- 8aerondight8@gmail.com
Thank you for your time :)
Story: Life and Death
ReplyDeleteAuthor: Semicolon Dash
Link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1VUENYTAbsfu_lZBKEQKerC2TJ1ASZBTE9E6lF8wTPII/edit
Feel free to read as much or as little as you like. I took what I had of this story on FIMFiction and posted it to GDocs. I don't have an editor or anything so I've done this all by myself. It's not the best work, but any help you can give would be appreciated.
Thank you for your time and help!
-Semicolon Dash
Human Fanatics
ReplyDeleteThecanterlottimes
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/35785/Human-Fanatics
Alternate link available upon request.
ADDED: alternate link (google docs. Comments enabled)
Deletehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/1-MYNQW3dzsChQDRI-yc8UwmZ7S94CPPDKOPExrcXkvo/edit
Violet Fire Chapter 7
ReplyDeleteNagagon
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sUe6Ym3Aq6hpHEKR064c5iV2wUFfDme-_kdfFG8aXQ4/edit?pli=1
Human Fanatics (chapter 1)
ReplyDeleteThe Canterlot Times
https://docs.google.com/document/d/15gIkCpgxx7sX8eBOL9SGTiInn6rvJw60WKQtvcF3XQA/edit
*note: rewritten as suggested by comments. I also have chapter 3 (new) linked at the end.
Just a heads up: in future, add it on to your previous comment.
DeleteAnd as another heads up: I'm going to try suggesting overhauling the comments section to RavensDagger when he gets back, so you may not have to remember that.
Do it! No, really, that sounds like a brilliant idea!
DeleteDoing it now, then!
DeleteNot that you'll be able to read this after the transformation's taken place. I'll be the only one to ever know this comment exists...
Silly Aquillo, every single comment gets emailed directly to my phone.
DeleteTurns out it doesn't get rid of the comment section after all. Sigh. Now everyone will know of my stupidity...
DeleteOn the other hand, new system!
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DeleteChoosybeggar
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wP0qy0iSKebHCAkDCNBxp_PjnQqRPqK0L6Xw_u-XdOY/edit
The Dragonlands
ReplyDeleteLuckyNChance
Prologue: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wqW3m6mi6gM7CsnEjnH2Qu899ACmJfp6PG1W9pDoSoo/edit
Dinky Do and The Lost Sapphire Statue
ReplyDeleteYkke Spark
Chapter 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OQrGKT7vCvHkxWJEPD3vBnLYEFL6nZGJVBASDg8NVZY/edit
Legacy of the Pegasi
ReplyDeleteJohn Doe (google) secret (fimfiction)
Ch 1: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Zrdy1btirmSdQgOffpymyvYYsPnMtF1EMR5GNuu1k7E/edit
Ch 2: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KhMqXg6jlf5x5n5FnqzDcNkBzRslsq9NxEW9dY76_Fs/edit
Ch 3: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oHY-rq9ZVlRbA3TQokjiBC2kJ_Fp6D52jxs_Lx7ibCk/edit
Posted info here as well. I'm still familiarizing myself with google docs and wasn't sure if the links were done correctly.
The links were done just fine, believe me.
DeleteSo, are we going to change a few things on here?
ReplyDeleteI sure hope so. I'll explain somehow, just not here....
DeleteSoz for late posting, but yeah. We should change stuff on here.
DeleteI don't know what we'd do, though. Maybe gather everyone together and have a group discussion or something.