Author's name :: Wilgrove
The Link ::
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/53578/1/Stars-%26amp%3B-Stripes/Chapter-1%3A-Changes
Genre :: Romance, Action, Sad
Critique requested :: Opinion on likelihood of getting to EQD; Basic
spelling, punctuation and format run through; Grammar and internal
consistency/consistency with the show
Anything Else :: The fic is pretty straight forth, I just need help on the
grammar and the tense. How these things got past four different editors, I
have no ruttin' clue, but there ya go.
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