Author's name :: Burraku_Pansa
The Link ::
Chapter one
Chapter two
Chapter three
Chapter four
Genre :: Adventure, Light Comedy
Critique requested :: Opinion on likelihood of getting to EQD; Basic
spelling, punctuation and format run through; Style, characterisation,
themes and plot (not that kind)
Anything Else :: Tell me if this latest chapter works. It's formatted a bit
differently than the first three were, with more frequent and drastic scene
breaks. There aren't any un-narrated parts now, either.
Oh, and on that note, the narration for the intro scenes of chapters two
and three have still yet to be looked at, as far as I'm aware. If you could
find the time to do so, I'd be grateful.
Number Of Distinct Docs Submitted :: 4
To answer your question, nope.
ReplyDeleteThough you should know that only the first three fields are mandatory. You can ignore the rest if you want to and just stick "Copy all else from *link*" in the bottom box.
You're right, though, in that some sort of system needs to be put in place for re-submissions. I might just add some extra words into the top.