In Their Highnesses' Clandestine Corps :: Acts I-III

Author's name :: AugieDog

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Act I
Act II
Act III

Genre :: Romance/Adventure

Critique requested :: Opinion on likelihood of getting to EQD; Are the sentences too convoluted?

Anything Else :: The story's gotten two strikes from the EqD pre-readers already due in large part to my love of overly complicated grammatical structures. Sunset Read over in FimFiction's "EQD Rejects" group suggested I try posting it here as part of my current revision regimen.

Thanks!
Mike