Author's name :: OtterMatt
The Link :: Chapter One
Genre :: Adventure
Critique requested :: Opinion on likelihood of getting to EQD
Anything Else :: This story is already pretty good, at least as my stories go. I'm very proud of it so far, but I want this thing to be perfect. I want to submit it to EqD when I release chapter 2, and I've got a feeling that with some TLC, it could be my second story to get accepted.
The main thing I've heard most so far is pacing. I need someone to point out places where the story is too quick and where it could use expanding. Fair warning: thar be headcanon ahead! I'll bet you've probably never read a Tia/Luna story like this before.
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