Tuesday, 28 August 2012

Adventures with Toshio in Ponyville

Author :: Sergeantmolt

The Link ::
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16-ARLJDdQvzL1Wj-TY9fwodXbcjTR9v-qnw8Xw65HY0/edit

Critique requested :: Grammar and internal consistency/consistency with
the show; Style, characterisation, themes and plot (not that kind); General
opinion on how I did with this fanfic

Anything Else :: Fairly soon within the story, HOW Toshio got to Ponyville
and why he left is described.

Number Of Distinct Docs Submitted :: 1

Note :: Who Toshio is is a thing that should really be in 'anything else'.

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