Author :: Sergeantmolt
The Link ::
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16-ARLJDdQvzL1Wj-TY9fwodXbcjTR9v-qnw8Xw65HY0/edit
Critique requested :: Grammar and internal consistency/consistency with
the show; Style, characterisation, themes and plot (not that kind); General
opinion on how I did with this fanfic
Anything Else :: Fairly soon within the story, HOW Toshio got to Ponyville
and why he left is described.
Number Of Distinct Docs Submitted :: 1
Note :: Who Toshio is is a thing that should really be in 'anything else'.
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