Author :: ZeroHero
Link ::
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kGa1Bv5kdwLTCS5KjsexLApRy23klH6z_CVS83zuDQA/edit
Critique requested :: Basic spelling, punctuation and format run through; Grammar and internal consistency/consistency with the show; Style, characterisation, themes and plot (not that kind)
Genre :: Adventure, Sci-Fi, Light-Comedy, Dark
Number Of Distinct Docs Submitted :: 1
Anything Else :: First chapter is a little shorter than later installments are planned to be, so dont expect me to add another few K's in words. ;P
The first chapter is the "hook". Its planting the seed of interest. As the story progresses, it develops a lot more.
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