Monday, 30 July 2012

Hubris Ch.1

Author :: ZeroHero

Link ::
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1kGa1Bv5kdwLTCS5KjsexLApRy23klH6z_CVS83zuDQA/edit

Critique requested :: Basic spelling, punctuation and format run through; Grammar and internal consistency/consistency with the show; Style, characterisation, themes and plot (not that kind)

Genre :: Adventure, Sci-Fi, Light-Comedy, Dark

Number Of Distinct Docs Submitted :: 1

Anything Else :: First chapter is a little shorter than later installments are planned to be, so dont expect me to add another few K's in words. ;P

The first chapter is the "hook". Its planting the seed of interest. As the story progresses, it develops a lot more.


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