Sunday, 29 July 2012

Fear of Falling: 1

Author :: Eustatian Wings

The Link :: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LTHDTL5yEj7ZDAproAVazhulhbSA--Oz0J-ph5r6sn8/edit

Critique requested :: Opinion on likelihood of getting to EQD; Style, characterisation, themes and plot (not that kind)

Genre :: Drama / Romance

Number Of Distinct Docs Submitted :: 1

Anything Else :: Rewritten from the ground twice after an Equestria Daily rejection. I'm mostly looking for a pacing and reader-response check but all opinion is welcome.

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