Saturday, 20 October 2012

*Untitled* - one shot

Author's name :: OtterMatt

The Link :: Chapter One

Genre :: Big ol' Slice O' Life

Critique requested :: Basic spelling, punctuation and format run through; Style, characterisation, themes and plot (not that kind)

Anything Else :: So far, this fic has struggled with not having much of a point. I know it's just a SoL type of thing, but I'd like to know if it's capable of holding its own weight, so to speak.

Also, I need a title. Any suggestions would be appreciated.

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