Author :: RTStephens
The Link ::
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Aqly26Lcyf0BSTmB-Ipko5kIzDkL4Yhk3RFt4BQr6cc/edit
Genre :: Adventure
Critique requested :: Opinion on likelihood of getting to EQD; Style,
characterisation, themes and plot (not that kind); I've been told my
writing gets too passive and has show vs tell issues, so pointing those out
will help.
Anything Else :: I'd like someone to help me with the rest of the story at
some point, so if anyone is willing to go through the whole thing, please
let me know. For now, hammering at the first chapter is enough.
Thank you for any help!
Number Of Distinct Docs Submitted :: 1
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