Sunday, 5 August 2012

Legacy of the Pegasi: Chps 1-3

Author :: secret (fimfiction) John Doe (google account)

The Links :: Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3

Critique requested :: Style, characterisation, themes and plot (not that kind)

Anything Else :: My main goal is to tell an fleshed out story where the reader established a vested interest with the characters. They should feel for the characters, be drawn into the plot, etc. Also creating three dimensional characters is important as well, especially for the OC's. This isn't my first piece of fiction, but it is my first MLP. EQD would be nice, but right now I want work on a believable story. That being said, I think I may have bit off more than I can chew. I'll appreciate anything you guys comment on.

Number Of Distinct Docs Submitted :: 3

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