Author's name :: Kaldanor
The Links ::
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uVKlRd2_Q0UkS62aADWigKVAmF8z6wkiY9THa1MXyqY/edit
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1O4GKWaPw1nPKGMpwwZZFBy3qLFEt-S_qByqfXIFm_no/edit
https://docs.google.com/document/d/16oEi9ucC31F4SOAW1QU97iot2Xmh59T_9MjPkSPR85M/edit
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1t4PNnakExesn4rXY1l0I8KSSJTYKEh1Xem5pp2G01EY/edit
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xfIaeKwDzPE8ZEF2UTH023-N25rM8KSIs7WLUY0pvCQ/edit
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KY34-b66BkLywn2YwZin8hCyXCJBmkghRjnFDgeegYI/edit
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1BPN98iNN7CQHNTeg60vGHxZK1muNrlq1p5kGvAWRbIQ/edit
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1mcaXxIf3rlYrEWi8TjnueBBqxtAZLzUTAJh4cTJcj1k/edit
https://docs.google.com/document/d/18URHGTrTeGk8BWh5NPqUcbjSF4sxjiIP3DCArBjZx98/edit
Genre :: Shipping, Normal
Critique requested :: Opinion on likelihood of getting to EQD; Basic
spelling, punctuation and format run through; Grammar and internal
consistency/consistency with the show; Style, characterisation, themes and
plot (not that kind)
Anything Else :: The first chapter uses some deceptive story telling
tactics. Plot holes are likely not actually plot holes. I've had a literal
adventure in finding editors for this story so far. This means I've had a
large turnover for a large amount of reasons, therefore the style can kind
of shift. The first chapter was most recently rewritten from the ground up
and will need the most help. Past that trying to make sure the chapters
feel like they're part of the same story, and basic editing would be nice.
No matter how many editors I go through it seems that more errors get found.
Number Of Distinct Docs Submitted :: 9
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