Well. I am Sorren, as of fimfiction, and I came to seek help with editing and most likely do some myself. But, I just recently submitted my story, "Hang in there Kid," to EqD. I got a fairly good response but I do need to fix some issues.
I believe I have gotten all the gramerical errors but please throw them in my face if I haven't.
EqD said that Scootaloo falling and not dying or bieng severly wounded was too much of a cliche. I believe I have fixed this though.
They also said Scoots meeting Rainbow is way to coincidental, which I have to agree. But I have absolutely no idea how to fix this without taking a hacksaw to the middle of the story. If there are any suggestions, please, for the love of Celestia tell me.
Oh, and nice to meet you salt ponies. I'll try to help with editing as it comes up.
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