Sunday, 4 March 2012

Melting Away

By some fellow called Melon Hunter!



https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zWOU1vU9Um0qAhaEz2PRpPdSyjFu903whYesa8m0SdE/edit

19 comments:

  1. Welp, I've edited the fic according to the recommendations of all the pre-readers. Only question is - should I release this to EqD now, or wait for the FimFic link to become active again after the competition officially ends? (They're still faffing around with judging the winners)

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    1. Is the fic part of the competition?

      Either way, I'm actually not done with finding all the spelling grammar stuff. XD So just give me a sec. SORRY!!!

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    2. Heh, sorry =P Yeah, it's part of the competition, but seeing as this is the first fic I've completed since August, I'm kinda keen to release it soon. Also, I've made some changes on the basis of a Mr. Chicken's comments, so the story may look a little different to last time.

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    3. Alright! I'll get them done as quick as I can!!! I think Mr. Chicken might be Jelfes, but I'm not sure at all.

      Also, you can delete my comments after you're done with them. Kinda like a marking that a problem is resolved. But the marking is like there used to be underlines but they just disappeared to thin air.

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    4. Already on that, boss. I combed through your first batch of comments earlier today. Would you say the story itself (and the comedy) is good enough?

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    5. I thought the ending was awesome. Then I looked at it for awhile. Then...then I noticed how far Luna has gone just to essentially make her sister go bald. Holy shit. Don't piss her off is what!

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    6. Now I'm just sorry I criticized you. XD Bluh. SERIOUSLY THOUGH... 1st. Place. Holy shit, bro.

      CONGRATZ, MAN, HOLY SHIT!!!

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    7. Indeed, congratulations!

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  2. How do I edit posts on this blog? I want to make that a link.

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  3. Nope, Mr Chicken is RavensDagger, I believe.

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    1. Wah?! But you said you were YOU! TWICE!!!

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    2. Yesterday it was me as the anonymous, but I haven't even gone into that fic today.

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    3. A BLAH! I NO IDEA! IT WAS RAVEN!!!

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    4. T'was me! Muahaha!

      and congrates Melon Hunter!

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    5. And with nary a peep from the pre-readers, Melting Away is now in the story posting queue! Thanks for all your help, guys.

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    6. Na, you did all the work. XD I know I didn't really do much.

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  4. Hubazuhwah-?


    Woah. That was just awesome.

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  5. Guys... I have no words.

    Seriously, WHAT?! Thank you!

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