Sunday, 18 March 2012

Hello Visitor's (Ver 3)

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-We will be rude
-We will not do the work for you

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    As of posting this out hit ratio for getting fics into EqD is 50%  We do what we can, if we feel like it, you do the rest.
    We hope you enjoy our services! 

(Reposted because the other got swamped)
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13 comments:

  1. bearycool31 March 2012 at 22:09

    I guess I will post the link here as well, just in case.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/14cn7nkNGhNLT0hQo5FcpUgUlSoiLKTuuwpoxNG2ojK0/edit

    The Trinity Poem

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  2. cheezesauce10 April 2012 at 23:13

    Ooo this is exciting! I would love a review or even edit if possible. ALL comments are welcome, please do come and have a look.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/14UgKDzxUZOkFASIOdO7ulCYesYJ_CgI4hR0O_mNHKcw/edit


    Synopsis: Little is known about the creature cast in stone. On the night of an eclipse, an unknown horror is released into the Everfree forest, seeking out a particular purple pony...

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    1. Bombedrumbum10 April 2012 at 23:15

      You know, this reminds me somewhat of the opening to Past Sins.

      Never did particularly like that fic....


      Nevertheless, editing/reviewing shall commence! Here's to a good fanfic! :D Cheers!

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  3. Melon Hunter12 April 2012 at 14:36

    OK, I'm back for another story run, and this time it's a long 'un. And a crossover. All critiques and nit-picking will be gratefully received. The link is to the prologue, and bottom-of-chapter links go up to Chapter 2.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1S-KLSHGIzrGVCPAEl4ON-zfWn17P3BAYy21syPIoTsk/edit

    Deus Ex: Equine Revolution

    Synopsis: Truth is the first casualty of war.

    The world is in flux; new ideals, groups and technologies permeate every level of society in this age of discovery. The field of augmentation has allowed ponies to improve themselves in ways that were unthinkable a generation ago. Yet, for every benefit, there is an inverse. A griffon civil war rages on the borders, feeding the profits of mercenary companies. Rising populations have forced the rich and poor ever further apart. Harmony is dying.

    Mortally wounded after a fatal attack on her laboratory, an earth pony researcher is augmented against her will and sent out into a chaotic world in search of answers. But what she finds may uncover an ancient conspiracy, that will shake Equestria to its very core.

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  4. Important Reviewer14 April 2012 at 19:57

    I suppose I'll take the plunge and have someone else read my story. I really have no idea if its good or bad so far so that's why I'm here. I've just got the prologue and chapter one done so far. Thanks for any help or advice you can give me.

    Description: Humans have looked at the moon and seen the man in the moon. Ponies have looked up at it and seen the mare in the moon. These two figures have been each others only friends during their long incarcerations on the barren rock, but soon the stars align and they are finally released from their prison. And separated from each other.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aL2IHjrX8PdqEFTZwFsa8h_-cfJKnIZqtSVc314ymRQ/edit

    and

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/11ZwDdCQaQ59brjMuD_QCMaxtik4GI-vriN51MEPyU3o/edit

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  5. Brookwood Bronco17 April 2012 at 16:56

    THANKS FOR THE REVIEW IN ADVANCE!! It's only the first chapter. If people like the story, I will continue.

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-gBpFvn0q3Wdi9QV5f2rTLE_T4witsFY6qtvR0b9GRs/edit

    Title: The Musings of a Bar Pianist

    Description: There is a bar in Ponyville run by Berry Punch that the locals love to go to. Some come to hang out while others come to forget their sorrows. There is a small flat-top piano in the corner of the bar. Every night at nine, a pony sits at that piano and plays until the bar closes. These are the audio logs of that pony, Staccato Diva.

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  6. Chromosome17 April 2012 at 19:54

    Holy crap, I'm back, and still alive! I've finally gotten this wrapped up, and hot damn did it take me forever. I've yet to do a run through for grammar, but I'm more concerned about pacing and certain points of character development.

    I give you: Air.
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gV-uEwU3ujFvEiL9Qb6oUSfTHOv2y-eL0txn1qJH1hw/edit

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    1. RavensDagger17 April 2012 at 20:05

      Whaha! Nice to hear of you again mate!

      I hope you don't mind, but we're kinda swamped atm (and so am I, I haven't even touched most of the fics that are up yet) Do yo mind waiting until tomorrow? Give a chance to others?

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    2. Bombedrumbum17 April 2012 at 20:06

      I would help if I could :/

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    3. Ben Gibson17 April 2012 at 22:41

      I can do it! I feel like reading something, I'm assuming just a quick run through? not like a full edit, right?

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    4. RavensDagger17 April 2012 at 22:43

      I already helped him a tad, I am sure he wouldn't mind more thought, if you don't mind, there are a few more fics on here that also need help.

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    5. Ben Gibson17 April 2012 at 22:45

      any ones in particular I should go through, also, what kind of things do we do on here for people? I haven't really been active on the internet much since before we started getting requests

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    6. RavensDagger17 April 2012 at 22:46

      Any of the last three posted on the main page really, they are the ones that need it most.

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